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Tampa English Tutor’s Secret Guide to Using Colons and Semicolons

Posted on 22nd April 2011 in Tampa Writing Tutor

Secret Guide to Using Colons and Semicolons

You may be a little apprehensive about the rules for using colons and semicolons. Let the Tampa English Tutor share a few of the ways to use each mark of punctuation. If you are struggling with the comma, check out our previous post on comma rules

Using Colons

A colon can be used to introduce a list.

To use a colon to introduce a list, you should have a noun that stands for the list directly before the colon.

Cal has three things on his mind: gold, silver and CD’s.

Notice how three things on his mind stands for the list.

Ideally, you want to have the word right before the colon be a noun that stands for the list. However, don’t tie yourself in knots if you can’t get the last word before the colon to be that noun.

On his mind, Cal has three things: gold, silver, and CDs does not sound as natural to me, even though it has the noun things in the proper place right before the colon.

Wal-Mart beats its competitors in two areas:  price and service.

Areas stands for the items on the list, so this example has the noun in the right place.

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Tip: Don’t use a colon directly after a verb.

She said: she loved me and she would never leave me.

Revise that sentence to read: She told me that she loved me and that she would never leave me.

A colon can also be used to connect two sentences. The second sentence should provide additional explanation of the first.

Mr. Erlbaum hated doing yard work:  every summer, he let his grass grow tall and his garden boxes fill with weeds.

Using Semicolons

Use semicolons between items on a list when those items contain one or more commas.

I have lived in Port Jefferson, New York; Dover, Delaware; and Tampa, Florida.

The stronger break provided by the semicolon makes the list easier to read.

Use a semicolon to connect two closely related sentences.

To err is human; to forgive is divine.

I said I would take you to the mall; I didn’t say what time I would do it.

Use a semicolon to connect two sentences when the second sentence contains commas.

The boys like to watch baseball on television; however, they love to play baseball in tournaments.

However is not a FANBOY (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so), so a comma is not enough to separate the sentences. The stronger break provided by a semicolon is perfect.

Knowing the rules for colons and semicolons will make you a more confident writer.

This guide created by Tampa English Tutor Eric Anderson and freelance blogger Gracie McRae. If your son or daughter needs to learn to write better or needs help with an essay, contact Eric at 813.787.8959 or by e-mail at eanderson at Tampa bay dot rr dot com.

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Tampa English Tutor Shares Three Comma Rules

Posted on 8th April 2011 in Tampa Writing Tutor

I just started working with an EAP student at St Petersburg College to get him ready for his Florida State Exit Exam.

Today we worked a little on some basic rules for using the comma.

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I shared three comma rules with him:

Use a comma when connecting two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction.  Use a comma before for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so — the FANBOYS — when they connect two parts of a sentence that each could stand on its own.

I want to be more comfortable using commas, so I have been studying the comma rules.
She is generous with her time, but she is stingy with her money.
He has a suspended license, yet he insists on driving everywhere he goes.

Use a comma between each item on a list of three or more items.

Sunday’s dinner consisted of roast beef, mashed potatoes, and apple pie.
He was an Eagle Scout, a skilled marksman, and a fine fisherman.
The politician insisted that he was kind, considerate, and honest.
I purchased three boxes of thin mints, two boxes of pecan sandies, and a case of  coconut clusters.

Use commas to set off the name of the person used in direct address.

John, will you please stop giving biscuits to my Labrador?
Will you come to my party, Sandy?

If you want to improve your writing to prepare for college or to advance your career, I can help. Call Tampa English Tutor Eric Anderson at 813.787.8959 or e-mail him at eanderson at tampa bay dot rr dot com.

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Tampa Writing Tutor’s Student Graduates from USF

Posted on 8th December 2010 in Tampa Writing Tutor

Time certainly goes quickly.

Yesterday, I found out that one of the students who I tutor in writing is graduating from USF.

I wish her well as she enters a tough job market.

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Regardless of her career path, the extra work she has put in to learning to write better will help her.

Eric Anderson is a Tampa writing tutor . He lives in Wesley Chapel, Florida. Reach Eric at 813.787.8959 or by emailing him at Tampa Tutor at Tampa Bay dot RR dot com.

 

English Tutoring in Odessa, FL

Posted on 8th December 2010 in Tampa Writing Tutor

Today I visited a new English tutoring client in Odessa, Florida.

Perhaps because of the cold weather, I selected Jack London’s “To Build a Fire” as today’s short story.

I thought the story might appeal to this student because he has a sense of adventure.

With his younger brother, I read “Casey at the Bat,” one of my favorite baseball poems.


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I would like to find some good short stories about baseball for the student. Does anyone have any suggestions? He is a strong reader at the seventh or eighth grade level.

Eric Anderson is an English and history tutor who works with students in Wesley Chapel, New Tampa, Temple Terrace, Carrollwood, and Odessa, FL.

Tutoring writing for one of my favorite students in New Tampa’s Cory Lakes

Posted on 17th March 2010 in Tampa Writing Tutor

I feel blessed that I have work to do every day. I get to meet some exceptional students and families as a private English tutor in New Tampa. Today, I tutored an ambitious college student from HCC Dale Mabry, a USF student, and one of my favorite third graders.

She and I spent some time reading a book that she was really excited about called The White Giraffe by Lauren St. John. I love to read with a young reader who likes to learn new words.

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We did a little writing and a little work on a project that she has for school.

If you have a student in New Tampa who needs writing or reading help, call Eric Anderson, Tampa English Tutor. Eric lives in Wesley Chapel, Florida, and tutors students from 3rd grade to adult. Contact Eric at 813.787.8959.